My manga update/Chapter 1

Feel free to read. (It is kinda like the first chapter to the manga. Just to say this also took almost all day to make/type out so someone at least comment on it XD And give me you're opinion on my characters if you want.)

Here is what I have so far. (If you read it you don't have to again. But I did add some extra stuff.) Okay the name is pretty funny XD It is called Tenshi Denwa. (Or Angel Telephone XD) It has comedy, supernatural, horror, tragedy, action, otaku life, adventure and a very small amount of romance in it XD It mainly is about a bunch of people that are called late at night by a real angel. And when she calls she says, "You are a chosen one. If you don't listen to me you are going to die the only way you will live is if you listen to me." (If they say yes I will listen to you they get supernatural powers to defend themselves from demons. Some turn into werebeast's, vampire's, Onna Yuki's and a bunch of other Yokai. But if they say no they will be attacked by a demon and will be in very big danger... Then after a while they all find each other (Slowly. XD) And begin to go on a adventure together they have to battle other Yokai to stay alive and some Yokai are way stronger then them. Latter on they find the Angel.

The Manga will take place first in Tokyo. (Where Kuroneko lives.) It will first show the city and her in her room watching anime. XD (Around 1:00 AM in the morning.) Then randomly she gets the phone call that pretty much changes her life forever. After listening to the Angel she says she thinks she is crazy but says yes anyway. Then all of a sudden she hears a scream and it sounds like it's coming from her parents room.

So she runs to there room and see's her parents and a monster and she says no way this can't be happening... Then all of a sudden she has a burst of power/speed and she begins to turn into a Bakeneko. (About the size of a demon which is about 6 feet tall. She can go to normal cat size or be bigger then a house.) Her parents are shocked. (Mainly her mom who faints in her dad's hands.) And Kuroneko begins to attack the demon and after about a hour she wins. (But is badly hurt during the battle. She gets a lot of stitches on her arm and on her stomach. Lucky her supernatural power heal most of the damage. )

Then she wakes up in the hospital. And she see's her parents and she says what happened? Then she see's her dad's arm is bandaged and in a sling. And she says oh no dad what happened to you're arm? Then he says nothing you need to rest. And she says that is not nothing you're hurt. (In fact she is the one that hurt him. And she has no idea. Right now she does not know how to control her powers at all.) After about two weeks she gets out of the hospital and goes to school. And it just so happens she gets embarrassed in front of the whole school. And out of no where her cat ears, tail come out and her eyes turn into cat eyes. And everyone stares at her.

Then her friend would say you should come with me. (As she takes her to the bathroom.) And she says what? What's wrong? Then her friends says just look in the mirror. And she looks and screams. And she says what? Why do I look like a cat girl from anime show? Then her friend says I am not sure? Then she says well just stay here I will go and explain to everyone that you where cosplaying XD Then she says okay.... Then her friend says I will be right back. (Then she goes.) A few minutes later she comes back and Kuroneko says did they believe you? Then her friend says yep. (And smiles.) Then she says hey you're back to normal. And Kuroneko looks back at the mirror. And says yeah I am. Then her friends says we better get going we will be late for class. Then Kuroneko says yep then they go to class.

When there in class another weird thing happens. (Kuroneko sits by the window.) Kuroneko see's a kid running from another one of those demons and she says oh no not again. Then she see's another person be hide it chasing it. And she realizes it is a boy from one of her classes. (He tends to skip classes.) Then she says what the heck? Then her teacher says Yami (Which is Kuroneko's last name.) Do you have something to share with the class? Then she says nope. Then he says then why are you looking out the window? Then she says oh I just saw a really pretty bird. Then he says oh really? (Being sarcastic. XD) Then all of a sudden she see's the boy from her class transform into a big black dog. (And she stare's out the window with a open mouth expression XD)

Then she see's the guy from her class kick the demon's but and save the kid. Then she says wow. And the teacher says Yami are you looking for homework? Then she says no sir (Again sarcastically XD) Then after class her friend says Kuroneko what where you looking at in class? I know it was not a bird. Then she says well you might think I am crazy if I say it. Then her friend says try me. Then she tells her and she says wow. I guess you're not the only one with supernatural powers. Then she says yeah I guess.

Then Kuroneko and her friend run into the boy in her class. And she says hi and he just stare's at her. And then he says hi back and then Kuroneko says was that you who transformed outside and saved that boy? And he looks and puts her into a empty class room. And she says yeah what the? And he says don't tell anyone about what you saw. Then she says oops and he says oops what? And she says my friend kinda already knows... And he says what friend? As she points to her friend that is standing outside the class room. (Then he grabs her and drags her in the class room.) Then he says I don't want any of you to say what you saw. Then they both say okay... And then randomly Kuroneko's ears and tail appear and her eye turn to cat eyes and she says oh no not again... And the boy in her class says what? again? Then she tells him and he says oh okay. Then he says I guess I am not the only one with weird powers. Then he says did you get a weird phone call late at night recently? Then Kuroneko says yeah.... Why?

Then he says when did you start getting those powers? Then she says after the phone call I think. And he says I knew it. Then she says what? And he says we are chosen ones. We got these powers to protect humans and stop evil. And then he shows her his half human and half animal form. And then he says his name. (Inugami.) And she says wow you're a Inugami monster? And he says yeah. Then she says okay what is going on then? Then he says I am not sure. And she says that girl on the phone that gave you powers wants you to help her? (She knows he is a criminal. Because he kidnaps, steals and skips class almost all the time. XD) Then he says yeah I guess. Then she says okay after school met me outside in the back. Then he says oh okay.

After school they meet in the back and Kuroneko says well we can't just stay in one place people will end up hurt around use. Then Inugami says yeah I agree then he says I will go home and back up some clothes then he says I was planing of moving anyway XD Then Kuroneko says okay and she says then I will ask if I am allowed to stay with my Uncle for a bit. (He lives far away.) Then Inugami says okay then Kuroneko's friend says what about me? I don't have powers like you two have. Then Kuroneko says well I want you to come. Then Inugami says that is not a good idea I don't want anyone to get hurt around me.

Then she says okay fine.... And they all say goodbye and go home. Then later that night Kuroneko's friend gets a weird phone call. And it says the same thing as Kuroneko said. And she says what the? Then she says okay yes I accept. Then all of a sudden she hears yelling/screaming from outside. Then she goes outside and see's a kid being chased by a demon. And she gets faster/stronger. And she starts to transform into a weretiger. (She is the younger sister to Kagetora. Her name is Toranoko. Her name means tiger cub.) And she says no way I have supernatural powers too? Then she attacks and after that she wakes up in the hospital and says what the? And she see's her mom, brother and Kuroneko. And she says what is going on and why am I in a hospital? Then Kuroneko explains.

(That is all I have so far I will add more later.)